Leonardo-Da-Finchy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[- The Nail -]

Hey, I'm a foamy fan...

But this was fricken' SWEET!!

Great job on everything here, especially those rippling reflections.

Congrats on the frontpage!

[Split Personality Teaser]

For once, a trailer makes me wanna see more...

Seriously.

This looks like it's gonna be great.

I'd add background music appropriate to the action, that's about it I reckon.

Keep it up!

[Under Judgement]

Nice reference to Line Rider

I loved that gadget...

Anywho, nice artwork there, and another good show of what a .swf has to go through. Could've done with a little more animation on the .swf itself, but good overall.

[Sailormoon]

Brilliant Artwork

But you need to animate a bit more.

Something that can make it seem less slow is to have more going on at once. If people can see an obvious tween go on for more than three second, they get bored.

A simple fix during the parade bit would be to add the streamers and glitter that's often flying about. Just make one symbol that repeats itself, and place one instanceon a layer in front of the balloons, and one behind, slightly reduced in size. It'll add depth, make it look busier, and keep people's attention longer.

Sound would always be good. By the way this is sort of cut off at the biking bit, I assume it wasn't finished anyway, yet.

TreborAlmasy responds:

I'm afraid I don't quite understand what you meant when you said 'place one instance behind the balloon and one in front'(for the streamer)

On a related note, the bike bit was the punchline, you see asian drive slowly on the interstate with their turn signal on. It's kinda stereotypical I know. Thanks for the comment though.

[.Pollution.]

A couple issues

One, like the previous guy said, no blood on the blade at the end.
Two, in a world so polluted that it chokes you that quickly, that would be acid rain. I think that should've been noted, with bubbling/steaming.

Quality work, but I just didn't enjoy it.

[The Mr. Puddy]

...

...the hell?

[Shape 01 - Fight]

Good...

Seems a lot like I Love Egg in style, but I think you've done quite well here. I'd like to see some more of this in the future.

MarcyVF responds:

Thanks 4 reviewing! I'm making the skater series now... so :D

[LostPart 4 BeatUpSandbag]

Nice stuff.

It certainly should have been there. But maybe you should have remembered to send in your bit.

Anyway, great stuff!